AI and The death of the student essay

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Interesting piece by author and university professor Brian Klaas

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He argues, far better than could I, what I've long thought -- the reason university students are asked to write essays isn't (or shouldn't be) simply to demonstrate what they know or to prove they've done the reading but that researching a topic, formulating a thesis about it, and then expanding and defending that thesis over a few thousand words is, in itself, an educational process that forces you to engage with the topic and consider it in far more depth than you would do simply from reading about it or attending a lecture.
 

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Really great article. And I agree... it's very important for students to learn how to think and how todo things on a basic level, even if most real world applications are taken over by machines.

For example, I think it's great that my computer science education still made us learn how computers work on a basic level and how to program in assembly. That shows what goes on under the hood. This understanding is valuable even if I would never make a real application in assembly for my job. Another comparison is learning how to do big calculations manually, even if I'd always do them with computers at my actual job.

I also agree that not having to write real, true research papers and essays with their own minds is likely costing kids a lot of cognitive development. I'm very lucky I finished my masters before LLM's took off, so that wasn't a concern.

I think it's pretty clear we need to make school days longer at least some of the time so that kids can be made to write what they need to write still at school under supervision. It's not realistic that we'll stop them from using AI's at home. ...and I don't think it is doing them any favors to just let them use the AI's to do all the work.

I'm actually coming to think that more time in school physically is a required solution for many problems. The pandemic cost a lot of students a lot of development and a lot of social development. ...of course, this will also be expensive, and getting funding for anything good is a challenge in the USA.
 

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“I would never read a book…I’m very skeptical of books. I don’t want to say no book is ever worth reading, but I actually do believe something pretty close to that. I think, if you wrote a book, you fucked up, and it should have been a six-paragraph blog post.”
Sam Bankman-Fried was indeed a moron who exposed many investors to also be overconfident morons. I'm sure he never read any good, thoughtful books in his life. I will say this often seems to be true of business books.... some of the books I've read on business and leadership have a few pages of real content then LOTS of filler.

Bankman-Fried's cynical attitude towards knowledge seems to have always been a thing in the USA and maybe getting worse with some recent events. I've seen people abuse the fake Einstein quote "If you can't explain it simply, you don't understand it" to suggest that they should be able to just dismiss everything that requires a verbose explanation.
 

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Sam Bankman-Fried was indeed a moron who exposed many investors to also be overconfident morons. I'm sure he never read any good, thoughtful books in his life. I will say this often seems to be true of business books.... some of the books I've read on business and leadership have a few pages of real content then LOTS of filler.

Bankman-Fried's cynical attitude towards knowledge seems to have always been a thing in the USA and maybe getting worse with some recent events. I've seen people abuse the fake Einstein quote "If you can't explain it simply, you don't understand it" to suggest that they should be able to just dismiss everything that requires a verbose explanation.
On the one hand, pith is an artform in getting an idea across with minimal words. It's not effortless. On the other, meme sized bites attract the laziest of readers.

I just called little Sam a lazy reader. But I'm on the same wavelength. Also, there are often entire voyages and epics in a sonnet.

I guess I'm on team: Get to the God Damned Point to the point where I welcome AI video to text summarizers.

And that fake Einstein quote certainly is the opposite of the (probable but disputed) Einstein quote: Everything should be made as simple as possible, but not simpler.

I think my crowning achievement in pith was was meta-telling a friend's three novel set in a six page short story. He was so mad.
 

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I guess I'm on team: Get to the God Damned Point to the point where I welcome AI video to text summarizers.
I agree. A lot of major news sources like Slate LOVE their narrative story telling and filler. Usually they need a few paragraphs to "set the stage" for their real information and it just annoys me most of the time.
 
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I teach a first level University writing course where students never write University essays. Aside from a short stint of teaching American History at a Liberal Arts college, I have never taught or required them.

Instead we focus on different forms of writing that are useful in their careers. The skills and some of the format is the same, but they are designed for different audiences and purposes. One reason is that we want them to connect what they are doing in the classroom with their career path, not just as a hurdle to overcome in the race to get a degree.

As an example, the major assignment for my current class is a Case Study. Just like a College Essay, students must start with a thesis statement and develop an argument. They then need to find a concrete real-world example to frame their discussion. The conclusion must include specific recommendations. The examples that we give them are written by professionals in their fields so that they can see how the document is used professionally.

The skills are the same. They must find sources, read them, extract information to support a thesis, and use conventions to integrate sources into their argument.

Because I teach a writing course, we look at writing as a process. I don't just see a final paper. I get a lot of their research and planning materials before I see a finished paper. They revise work multiple times.

So of course my colleges and I have spent a lot of time thinking about how AI impacts the writing process, and how to help students to continue to develop their critical thinking skills in this changing landscape. The last two years we have spent a lot of time researching and discussing various types of AI. We have just received word from our University president that AI will be covered in all relevant courses, an area where I have been out in front of. It is clear that using AI is going to be a requirement for many entry level workers in STEM. And what we are hearing from people in industry is they need our students to tell them how it works.

So with that lead up, I would throw out a few points:
  • We teach writing as a process. That means I see preliminary work and have opportunity to discuss work with students so that I can be sure they really understand their sources. Writing instructors are looking at helping subject area instructors to create more scaffolded assignments to ensure understanding.
  • We have novel assignments that reflect industry needs and student interests. Students who care about the subject are going to put in more discretionary effort. I want them to love their topic and take ownership of their thesis. This also means that when an LLM assumes you want a 5-paragraph essay, you are going to miss key requirements of the assignment.
  • LLMs are C students. We are a competitive program, and most of my students are not going to settle for a C in even a GenEd class. Writing an A paper requires individual effort.
  • LLMs can't effectively replace jobs. They can replace tasks. Companies that outsource, for example, drafting a legal filing and submit it get severe reprimands from courts. You can get a first draft from an LLM, but if a real attorney does not read and check the work, they are taking a risk. Just like if you have a paralegal do the work unsupervised. Our best examples of problematic LLM writing comes from the legal field because it is an adversarial process: someone is reading your filing to find weaknesses and knock down your argument. Peer reviewers in STEM are not as dedicated to tearing apart a draft, so a lot slips past to publication if it sounds plausible.
  • When we think of writing as a process and using LLMs to do tasks, we start to find where it can help writers instead of replacing them. I have my students use LLMs to brainstorm ideas, to develop a concrete thesis statement, and to probe counterarguments. But then it is up to them to do the research, frame an argument, and incorporate sources to support their ideas. Once they have a complete draft, using tools to smooth grammar is acceptable. But the main draft is entirely theirs.
I find that my students are having pretty much the same struggles they had 5-6 years ago transitioning to college writing. A lot of which is because high school writing is dry and formulaic, and they are rewarded for vocabulary more than the strength of their ideas.
 

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I guess I'm on team: Get to the God Damned Point to the point where I welcome AI video to text summarizers.
I am on team Don't Bury the Lead.

I am constantly telling my students to frontload conclusions.

If I try to read 3 pages and they don't tell me why I am reading this information, I don't get far. On the other hand, I will read hundreds of pages if I know what it's about. Without knowing the thesis, the reader has to try to figure out how all of the information is connected and what the significance is. Usually they will jump to their own conclusions because we naturally try to make sense of information and look for patterns. But readers need a map or they get lost.
 

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I am on team Don't Bury the Lead.

I am constantly telling my students to frontload conclusions.

If I try to read 3 pages and they don't tell me why I am reading this information, I don't get far. On the other hand, I will read hundreds of pages if I know what it's about. Without knowing the thesis, the reader has to try to figure out how all of the information is connected and what the significance is. Usually they will jump to their own conclusions because we naturally try to make sense of information and look for patterns. But readers need a map or they get lost.
Yes! One analogy I thought of after reading a bad book was like if I gave you a 200 page essay that goes on and on about how to smelt certain ores and grind the metal into particular geometries and yadda yadda... you would have trouble knowing WTF is going on. It helps tremendously if it starts out by saying "this is how you build a windup watch." Even more so if it is divided into clear sections about different components.

Your other post also got me thinking about how many school programs encourage a bad, overly verbose style of writing. Like you need to cover X pages so you learn to do some flowery words and filler material. Most professional writing encourages you to be extremely concise. I was reminded of this when I went back to school for a masters.
 
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I agree. A lot of major news sources like Slate LOVE their narrative story telling and filler. Usually they need a few paragraphs to "set the stage" for their real information and it just annoys me most of the time.
On a related note, I often see what looks like an interesting YouTube video, and then I see it is an hour long. Get to the fucking point. Granted, TikTok is more my speed these days, and even then they ramble lol. Brevity is king.